你看见了吗

                                                                      那挺拔的树干

                                                                        你看见了吗

                                                                      那伸展的枝条

                                                                         你看见了吗

                                                                       那含苞的新叶

                                                                         你看得到的

                                                                    这么明显的生命力

                                                                           多么旺盛

                                                                       它用柔嫩的枝条

                                                                     轻抚着平静的湖面

                                                                          泛起一丝涟漪

                                                                        它那茂盛的柳条

                                                                    迫不及待地向外伸展

                                                                           犹如喷泉一样

                                                              像人们展示着它蓄势待发的力量

                                                                               我们的理想

                                                                                 也是如此

                                                                              是我们的心中

                                                                                永远的信念

                                                                                  总有一天

                                                                               它会喷薄而出

                                                                              骄傲地面对世人

                                                                                  让我们为它

                                                                                       自豪

高一（4）     8

赏析：偶然在网上看见的一张柳树的图片，觉得它那摇曳的柳条，含苞的新叶，有种蓄势待发的生命力。也许有人喜欢苍劲挺拔的松树，或者是花香四溢的桃树，可我唯独喜欢柳树。有人说它随风飘动，经常用来比喻没有主见的人，可我认为在春风的吹拂下摆动着它的身体，才更能现实出它的生命力。只有柳树，能够这样自由摆动自己的身躯。在公园，我看见的下雪天的柳树，柔弱的枝条被大学压着，正式因为柔软，才没有轻易被压断。枝条上是一粒粒含苞的新叶。隐隐透着一点新绿。因此，看到题目时，脑海里的第一个反应就是柳树，蓬勃的，旺盛的，蓄势待发的，正如柳树一样。